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This part is a little tricky for me, partially because of the Mikuru scenes. Technically, putting in future Asahina is really fanservice, and technically isn't needed. Still, I kinda wanted to put her in, so I did. I apologize if the scene feels pointless by stories end. I'll change it if it's not appreciated. Haruhi's scene with Mikuru I also felt I needed to put in at some point since it does create some interesting scenario's. I'm not sure if I did a good job handling the situation, so I apologize if it sucks.

Then there's the Kunakida bit. I really wanted to have a scene with Kunakida so he didn't miss out, but I just couldn't figure out what he'd talk about. Sasaki is a plot point for the last couple of novels, and I thought that I could perhaps foreshadow it by mentioning something about it here, but then I just couldn't figure out whether Haruhi would use this information against Kyon or just keep it to herself. So far I have gone with the later since I'm not sure where to fit it without complicating the story further. I could basically get rid of it, but there wouldn't be a lot for Kunakida to discuss.

Anyway, let me know what you think and give advice if possible.
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